New Song, New Genre

So, I wrote a song the other day, and it took me one night to finish. I'm proud of this song because it's one of the first songs I've ever written that falls under the alternative/rock genre: mostly what I listen to. The song has more of a dissonant tone, rather than a happy tone, which is what I usually write. I will post the lyrics now, but I rather you critique the song as a whole after I post my recording later on. Enjoy!

(UNTITLED)- let me know if you think of a good title for the tune :)

Verse:

We're risking everything we want

Edge of destruction, we are in a rut

so take a chance on me

and let the pleasure seep deep into your black heart

Chorus:

I need you, you need me

let loose and I know that we'll get there soon

It's frightening to live like a stranger

trapped in the same old news

Verse:

Now I'm sleepin' on your stoop

you're trapped inside, my head is in a loop

It's time to let him go

Let the past be past I know

You still act the part

Chorus 1x

Bridge:

And now the world is catchin' up to you

you can't turn back,

I was the one that you used to get him back